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I nevah get invited to parties.

I cant beleive you've made 11 of these.

Aint nothin gonna break your stride, aint nothin gonna slow you down, OH NO! You got to keep on mooooovin!

Potential!

While its clear you are new to flash, what with the highly simplistic designs and your characters having no arms or legs, and just hand floating in the air, you definitelty have a few things right!
The idea was cute, and despite the crude drawings, you got the EMOTIONS of the character across, which is what's important in animation.
You also used some rather dynamic camera angles there for something so crudely drawn.
I'd say if you keep working at it, you could very well make something fantastic in not too long.

p.s.

Its also good to credit the musician who made the music for your flash. That was catchy music and I'm sure others (including myself) would love to know where its from.

A couple of things.

1.) You are so totally ripping off Knox with the blue clay guys who have no faces. Come up with your own style of clay. One thats better than faceless blobs. There's people making clay movies 100 times better than what Knox does. Or at least use a different color of clay. Maybe give them some eyeballs. ANYTHING!

2.) Your flash-running movie player there was nice. But hoooooooo DOGGY the video quality was low! I realize you dont want a big file size, but this sucker's just a little over 1 meg. You could probably up the quality of the video quite a bit in flash and not go over the 5mb portal limit.

Other than that, woo for you.

ClayWay responds:

you so true about the quality but for some reason my max is 2mb

Lurv and Wub <3

I've always loved the A Simple Line series. Its what made me a Thirsty-For-Chicken fan.
Its like the Gorillaz in a weird way.
A combination of fantastic animation and catchy music.
Its hard to find a flaw. But then it always is with this series.
Perhaps the Elephant stood still too long at the end of that song (from the greatest Spongebob episode ever). But thats more of a personal gripe than a flaw. All the parts in this were damn good.
Its sad that the lack of video-game characters and FamilyGuy references will prevent this from reaching the Top50 where it belongs. Oh well.
<3

F00d f00d f00d f000000000d

I wish I had a fast Computer so I could run flash 8 and help organize some dailytoons.

But that will never happen.

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Great toons as always.

o_O

Kinda creepy seeing another music video to the same song.
Erm......keep up the good work?

Advice.

1.) Come up with your own characters and concepts. The whole "Lol Final Fantasy Character in random situation" crap has been done to death and was never funny to begin with.

2.) Learn to draw.

3.) Learn how to ANIMATE. Dont make billions of layers, place the characters body parts on each layer and then just motion-tween the peices about.

4.) If you insist on using your own voice for a flash, get mircrophone that doesnt make you sound like croaking frog trying to vomit.

Bogswalloooooooooop.

Oh my.
Much laughter was expelled from my gut.
Much laughter indeed.

A man said to the universe: 'Sir, I exist!' 'However,' replied the universe. 'The fact has not created in me A sense of obligation.--------- ---- When the gods wish to punish us, they answer our prayers.

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