Score: 8

"wiffle ball"

submission: TANKMEN .5

date: January 24, 2008

I really shouldnt like these things.
I really shouldnt.

But damnit, I enjoy them so much. I could sit here and point out all the stuff that I normally give cartoons lower scores for. But it wouldnt change the fact I like these so damn much.

It must be all the camp. It does things to your mind.

Score: 10

"hooray"

submission: RWD: 009 Feliz Cumpleaños

date: January 19, 2008

how old IS luis now? 48? 49?

nogfish

fishnog

Score: 8

"quite funny"

submission: Taxi

date: January 19, 2008

graphics arent stupendous but they arent in an anime style and there's some traditional animation here.
The voices are awful but I think that makes it even funnier.

And its short. Thank god its not long and killed the funny before the end.
A nice wee package.
Good job.

Score: 10

"oh wow"

submission: Race Across The Rainbow

date: January 17, 2008

what an amazingly cute distinct and hyper little cartoon.

And done to the best remix of 19-2000 out there.

Great graphics. Great incorporation of Swift 3d.

Well done on all levels.

Score: 4

"DESERVES a 4/10"

submission: XXXI : Outcast - Ep. 1

date: January 11, 2008

When I first watched this flash it seemed like there was no sound. But there was text scrolling up the screen.

"oh the volume must be too low" I thought.

SO I turned up the volume so I could hear the worst attempt at an English accent ever.
You might have worked hard on the backrounds and plot, but this lacks any polish at all.
So lets just break it down into some easy to read points whats wrong here

*** first is the voices. the volume is too low and the sounds are too loud, thus drowning out the voices. Also all the accents were awful. You sound like you're 12. But a better mic, they dont cost much. It sounds like you're shouting through a hotdog bun. It's so muffled. And get some voice actors. All the characters sound like preteen kids.

*** Its nice that you made your own original sprites but these dont look good. Very generic "fantasy genre" designs. Also, animation in flash where you tween all the body parts of your characters around doesnt look good. It never has. It looks cheap and unnatural and lazy.

Things I liked:

*** the plot. if you could make this look not so crappy, it could be a very nice series. but as of now it looks like a newbie at flash did it.

*** the backround art. particularly the forest. light grey color pallets and soft lighting choices made it look very nice. the only trouble is, your tiny rectangular characters stick out way too much with their bright colors and pencil-tool outlines.

Of course, you're not going to read anything I wrote and will just whine that I didnt give it a 10/10 due to your own arrogance.

I hope you try harder next time.

Score: 10

"hahahah"

submission: Advenntuers Of Mareo Man

date: January 11, 2008

funny

also a great tribute to arfenhouse

Score: 10

"ooh"

submission: Disk extermination

date: January 7, 2008

Everything really meshed here. The black and white with occasional grey tones really gave the feel of watching an animated comic.

And it was funny, and the backrounds were all shaded very well.
Quite professional.

Oddly, the animation reminded me of Bill Plymptons work, although I cant put my finger on why exactly. Either way, good stuff.

Score: 10

"yay"

submission: Coffee Break.

date: January 6, 2008

I was so hoping you would do this.

As stated before, I like this quite a bit.
Quite a bit indeed!

Score: 10

"ooh"

submission: RWD: 008 Nash Bunny

date: January 4, 2008

That was pretty badass. Like some sort of combo between Inspector Gadget, XJ9, and an adorable bunny.

nogfish.
fishnog.

Score: 9

"that WAS shocking."

submission: Santa borrows a Guitar

date: January 3, 2008

I don't use the term "I lol'd" much but thats the only term that can accurately describe what I just saw.

Very very cute, and the timing on everything was just awkward enough to make it suprising and funny. Good stuff.