Score: 10

"hell yes. hell yes."

submission: The Ballad of CrippleKane

date: June 28, 2009

As I have told you multiple times on aim over the long process of you making this crazy thing, BAD ASS.

A marriage of good music with animation that matches up with it perfectly. Coupled with a great dusty orange art palette and brilliant cinematography.

It just all ties together so well and I am SO GLAD its finally done.

Score: 9

"ooh"

submission: Candy Land

date: May 26, 2009

i had to do something like this in college. i recall i took the line agent smith says in the matrix "I must get out of here...I must GET FREE" and applied it to a hamster in a tank.

good cinematography
really good explosion graphics
good short overall

kudos on using flight of the Valkyries
also kudos on subtle use of optimus prime

Score: 10

"original, and very cute"

submission: War, Snow and Fire

date: May 19, 2009

its so refreshing to see something stylized and imaginative on the portal. everyone these days seems to be trying to imitate someone else. it makes you feel sick just to come here.

this however was great. it didnt look like anything else on this site. and it told a nice story that wasnt too long or too short. the animation was all pretty good for the most part.

special kudos to that fire though. the looping fire was godly.
i liked the minimalist art style as well.

a joy to watch.

Score: 10

"wappinwappinwappin"

submission: bluh bluh bluh.

date: May 17, 2009

i like how you made the scientists face look like something you would draw by hand

also i liked the bluh bluh bluh bluh bluh bluh bluh bluh bluh bluh

also bluh

Score: 10

"d'awwwww"

submission: The Ignored Monster

date: May 15, 2009

very cute

good video editing as well. not perfect but very close to it. the monster sometimes didnt move with the camera's shakiness as well as it could have.

very cute monster design as well.

Score: 10

"i laughed quite hard"

submission: Saunich der Hejhaug

date: May 10, 2009

great drawings, good animation

but most especially good voicework.

saunich's gurgling throaty voice really gave me a good laugh.

well done

Score: 10

"hey"

submission: Brawl Funnies [Dick 1]

date: May 7, 2009

you know how
when mario eats a mushroom

he gets bigger?

but in real life

HEH

mushrooms dont do that

XD

Score: 8

"cute!"

submission: Patchman:Simple Pleasures

date: May 6, 2009

there is potential here. while your character has no insane amount of detail (which is perfectly fine) he is recognizable (which is good).

the animation seemed a bit odd. the frame-by-frame parts that were traditionally animated seemed to have much thicker linework than the parts where you just tweened body parts around. There were some places here where you were trying to make your character "swoosh" and stretch and smear to show fast movement, like when he knocked things off the tablet.
I think you could go alot crazier with this sort of thing.
It almost seemed liked you were afraid to take it too far.

But this sort of character is the perfect vehicle for taking it to far. He's a patchwork blob! Have him really FLAIL!

Also good choice in music. Not enough people have been exposed to the rock opera grandeur that is the Trans Siberian Orchestra.

Also, and this pertains to the let-yourself-go-crazy thing i wrote above, this seems like the sort of character that is funnier the more its injured. Like a Wile E Coyote but much cuter.

Hot sauce in eyedrops, while a cute concept is a bit nonsensical if only because there FAR WORSE and FAW MORE HAZARDOUS fluids that can be mistaken for eyedrops.

Hell, there are drinking games devoted to squirting hot sauce in one's eye!

i've lost track.
what was i talking about i cant remember. IGNORE ME.

Score: 7

"hnnnnnnngggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg"

submission: There Was This One Time

date: May 1, 2009

Thanks for voting, ZekeySpaceyLizard! Your experience points have already been deposited for today - thanks for doing the overtime!
You gave this submission a vote of "5"

I still dont like you but this was pretty ok.

I am confused why the rhino wears armor. But considering the themes, it doesnt need to make sense really considering the bat is dressed like a person from the victorian era.

i left a longer review in that other place. i also left an image of some dapper men in pantaloons.

Score: 10

"nog fish"

submission: Run, Darnell, Run!

date: April 30, 2009

fish nog

incredible animation there

i hope this wins pico day. i loved the butterfly putting on the hood.